Finished! (Still need to post it up, though)

Yay!! I got Jamie's and Syelina's part done! (I ended up writing the whole thing, but I sent my ideas and progress to ketchupman so he could check it over. He's been busy, so don't blame him!) I can hopefully put it up soon, but I still want to look it over a couple more times for any mistakes. Now I can work more on Annik and Nai, as well as the other characters and get the story going!

Thanks!

Thank you guys for reading our chapters, character profiles and other stuff! We greatly appreciate it, and we now have 508 views! Thanks for being amazing! :D :D :D :D :D :D

-Kiki and Sab

New Page (On The Right)

As you may have noticed, I added a new page just for you guys to give us critiques and ideas. So go ahead, check it out!

Pictures By Sab

These are all links to pictures that Sab drew of some of the characters... check it out!
This is her gallery: Sab's Puppetmaster Art but you can also click on the links below.

Halloween theme
Nai as Devil
Liera as a Ghost
Annik as a Witch
Extreme as a Werewolf
Sebastian as a Serial Killer

Christmas theme
Liera
Annik
Nai
Extreme
Another Extreme
Sebastian

Misc.
Group Picture
Puppets and Vocaloid
Swap!
Puppetmaster Tattoos
Nai's On Red Team!
Sonahara Sisters
Extreme

So yeah.... enjoy!

-Kiki

Annik and Nai 1

   "Uhhhhh," moaned Annik, stirring. "Where the hell am I?"
   The last thing she remembered was being in the burning theatre, and passing out from the fumes. But she was in an old, abandoned building, in a wagon with a bunch of other captured Puppets. As she sat up, she noticed some of the others were awake too, but they were still weak from inhaling smoke. Then Annik saw something interesting.
   There was a Puppet sleeping on the ground, with flaming red hair and very punkish clothes on. As     Annik got up and inched towards her, she saw that the Puppet had no collar on. But then she stepped on a finicky board and made a loud creaking noise. The Puppet's eyes snapped open, and Annik stumbled back in surprise.
   One eye was amber orange and the other blood red.

Nai 3

Warning, may contain some swearing.

Just An Update On What We're Working On

Hi, sorry for not posting anything up lately! Just so you guys know, I'm posting an update so you don't think we've died and left the story unfinished :D

So ketchupman and I are working on Syelina's and Jamie's part after they join the Organization... we have to work out the plot and write down what happens. I have Syelina's part done, and ketchupman just has to create Jamie's and then we have to write their reactions when they meet...

Sab is working on the drawings of your characters (check out the Writing Challenge(?) page if you don't know what I'm talking about) and helping out to create the plot. She's been busy creating nefarious characters and creating trouble for our 5 heroes...

Any comments, suggestions or ideas would help a lot, so feel free to critique and give us ideas!

-Kiki

Annik 7

Dust went up her nose and made her sneeze, while the darkness enveloped her in a heavy, velvety embrace. She seemed to hit a cold, gelatinous patch of air, which made Annik suspicious. All of a sudden, her limbs relaxed completely, and Drake had to literally drag her to their destination.

“Man, I wish they didn’t use this spell. It gets tiring dragging Puppet after Puppet after they get like this,” muttered Drake to himself.

Annik straightened up at the word, “spell,” but immediately fell limp again. Her mind was spinning; any thoughts or reason too muddled up to comprehend.

“Here’s the new one,” said Drake, talking to a man with oversized glasses and salt-and-pepper hair. He seemed kindly enough, but when he smiled, it was full of hunger and iniquity. Annik tried moving away, but couldn’t. A flash of panic went through her mind. It cleared her mind long enough to realize what they did with this spell.

‘Hmph. Foolproof way to make sure the Puppets behave,’ thought Annik, and she closed her eyes as the confusion settled back down in her mind.

She opened her eyes a few minutes later, her head pounding with the after-effects. She was on a stage of some sort, facing a set of heavy, red, velvet curtains. She shook her head slowly, and felt something strange. Looking to either side of her, she saw that her arms and legs were tied separately to see-through ropes that led above her head. Looking up, she could see the strange man with the glasses holding onto the ropes. He flashed her a crooked smile and his face disappeared.

In the background, there were voices whispering, “We still have about an hour before the show starts. Let’s get some drinks before we have to actually do some work.”

‘Crap, an hour?!’ thought Annik to herself. ‘I’m going to be stuck like this for an hour?!’

She could see that he had tied the ropes to the railing of the platform the man was standing on.

Annik tugged on the ropes desperately, but there was absolutely no give or stretch. “Damn, damn, damn, damn!!” she muttered to herself.

And then, to make matters worse, she smelled smoke. Looking around, she noticed tendrils of fire creeping up the velvet curtains in front of her. ‘Oh crap, oh crap, oh crap!’ thought Annik to herself. She tugged even harder on the ropes but to no avail.

‘I’m doomed,’ thought Annik simply, and passed out from the fumes. 

-Kiki